[cite web |url=http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15395 |title=Because I could not stop for Death |accessdate=2008-01-07 |last=Dickinson |first=Emily |authorlink=Emily Dickinson |publisher=Academy of American Poets] ]Lakoff and Turner point out that we have standard metaphors in everyday speech, not especially for poets. One such metaphor, DEATH IS A JOURNEY, uses our idea of “journey,” an example of what Lakoff and Turner call a “schema.” The journey schema has “slots,” or blanks that we fill in. Mandatory slots for the journey schema are for departure point, destination, and traveler. Some optional slots are means of transportation, roadmap, roadblock, and driver or conductor.
DEATH IS A JOURNEY is a commonplace metaphor we construct from the journey schema. The schema even leaves tantalizing blanks we don’t know how to fill: What is the destination? It also suggests questions: Will the person come back? Will we meet them again when we make the same journey?
The structure of Dickinson’s poem is the way she assembles related metaphors that are not completely compatible. She maps different things to the journey schema. In the first line, LIFE IS A JOURNEY but, starting in the second line, DEATH IS A JOURNEY. She couples these two by plugging the moment of death into the “destination” slot of LIFE IS A JOURNEY, but into the “departure point” slot of DEATH IS A JOURNEY. This incompatibility is not to be viewed as a flaw. The ambiguities from multiple metaphors, along with the unanswered questions they create, are regarded as keys to the poem's creation of meaning and to its emotional effect.
The third stanza is complicated by further
* The mention of the children playing recalls again the LIFE IS A JOURNEY metaphor. We travel from childhood to adulthood to old age.
* The mention of the grain suggests the metaphor LIFE IS LIKE THE SEASONS. We start in spring. We grow, then we ripen, then we’re harvested and winter comes.
* The mention of the setting sun suggests the metaphor LIFE IS LIKE A DAY. We start in the morning, then we go through the day, and then evening comes, and finally night falls.
These three metaphors make the same action — life — take place in three different time frames: a day, a year, a lifetime. Dickinson tucks these time scales into the journey of death that’s supposed to be eternal. Thus, in the last stanza, she resolves the poem conclusively in another metaphor: DEATH IS A FINAL DESTINATION.
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Further reading
*cite book | last = Ciardi | first = John | title = How Does a Poem Mean? | publisher = The Riverside Press| location = Cambridge, MA | year = 1959
*cite book | last = Drew | first = Elizabeth | title = Discovering Poetry | publisher = W.W. Norton & Company| location = New York | year = 1933
*cite book | last = Hobsbaum | first = Philip | title = Metre, Rhythm, and Verse Form | publisher = Routledge | location = New York | year = 1996 | isbn = 0415122678
*cite book | last = Kinzie | first = Mary | title = A Poet's Guide to Poetry | publisher = University of Chicago Press | location = Chicago | year = 1999 | isbn = 0226437396
*cite book | last = Norman | first = Charles | title = Poets on Poetry | publisher = Collier Books | location = New York | year = 1962 Original texts from 8 English poets before the 20th Century and from 8 20th Century Americans.
*cite book | last = Oliver | first = Mary | title = A Poetry Handbook | publisher = Harcourt Brace & Co | location = New York | year = 1994 | isbn = 0156724006
*cite book | last = Oliver | first = Mary | title = Rules for the Dance | publisher = Houghton Mifflin | location = Boston | year = 1998 | isbn = 039585086x
*cite book | last = Pinsky | first = Robert | title = The Sounds of Poetry | publisher = Farrar, Straus and Giroux | location = New York | year = 1999 | isbn = 0374526176
*cite book | last = Quinn | first = Arthur | title = Figures of Speech | publisher = Lawrence Erlbaum Associates | location = Hillsdale | year = 1993 | isbn = 1880393026